Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 7, 2021
Celebrate ANZAC!
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Hello Annabelle It's Aarooshi and no I don't celebrate But I love eating the Anzac cookies I love your blog-post It reminds me of when I did my tasks on Anzac day and yes it is quite sad.i love how It's really informative and how you talked about what you learnt. Maybe next time check your spelling for some errors.I wonder what books you read on Anzac day? Here is the link to my blog https://maraarooship.blogspot.com/ Check it out.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Aarooshi! thanks for the feedback. If you don't mind I am going to give you some! try and put more comers and full stops so the reader can take some breathers. And maybe a space after a full stops. Thanks for the comment by the way!
Deleteaue Aarooshi.
Hello Annabelle It's Aarooshi and no I don't celebrate But I love eating the Anzac cookies I love your blog-post It reminds me of when I did my tasks on Anzac day and yes it is quite sad.i love how It's really informative and how you talked about what you learnt. Maybe next time check your spelling for some errors.I wonder what books you read on Anzac day? Here is the link to my blog https://maraarooship.blogspot.com/ Check it out.
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