Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 1, 2020
Pirates!
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Great work Annabelle! I like how your blog post has a lot of detail to tell others about the tasks. You are thinking 6!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Annabelle
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your slide show on pirates. You used lots of descriptive language in your story and that made me interested to read on. Keep up the great work!
Hi Annabelle,
ReplyDeleteThat was a really good story and the phrases were funny. good job
hi Annabelle,
ReplyDeletegreat work on your reading slides! I like how you found out what the pirate sayings mean and your story was creative.