Friday, April 17, 2020
Mt Everest diary entry!
For are writing in literacy we had to write a diary entry pretending we were sherpas and guiding people up Mt Everest.This was really fun and interesting to write. I really enjoyed writing a diary entry especially because it was based on a cool location and an exciting subject.If you were a sherpa what would your exotic name be?
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Hi Annabelle! Its Daisy here. I loved the way you described the journey as if you had really are climbing Mount Everest. This reminds me of the time my mum told me that it was pronounced "Eyv-Rest" I did see a few spelling and or grammar mistakes, and next time you could put a capital E in Everest, maybe needs a bit more punctuation, but I loved the imagination! Well done!
ReplyDeleteWow Annabelle I'm really impressed with this, you worked really hard well done! xx
ReplyDeleteHi there Annabelle
ReplyDeleteWow this was fascinating to read. You sounded like a professional mountaineer! You thought of so many ideas to include in your diary writing such as food, weather conditions, people you were with, sleeping and many more. I'm not sure what my name would be if I was a sherpa, maybe something like "Mountain Goat Mama"! Great work.